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The dead awake.  The sleeping rise.
The fatal trumpet blasts the skies.
In dazzling white the Lord descends,
And all of his creation ends.

The quick and dead view him with fear,
As each thought, word, and deed, is clear;
No secrets undiscovered stay,
Nor space, nor worlds; nor time, nor day.

To heaven or hell each soul must fly -
Each body quakes; no eye is dry,
That sees the glory of the Lamb
Of God, great I AM THAT I AM.

The universe trembles in awe
And yields to its Creator's law;
The day has come, it is today
That all the worlds must melt away.

The King of Kings prepares to speak,
All turn towards him, all are weak;
Gabriel's call to wake the dead
Abruptly stops.  All is mute dread.

"I came to save you from your crime;
To turn to Me I gave you time
Enough, and more; it is too late
For you to influence now your fate."

All gaze at Jesus, terrified,
And none their fear of hell need hide,
Nor could they if they would do so,
For He would always all things know.

"Whose name is in the book I hold
(Unopen'd yet) is of the fold:
Whose name is not indited there
Must be condemn'd to grim Despair."

Each soul at length found its last home,
From where it nevermore would roam;
Some to hell's lonely, fiery heat
And some to a joyful heaven and sweet.

Time rolls away.  Use what is left
Before the universe is cleft
Asunder, then to nothingness;
Before your life swift time shall press:

There shall no matter soon exist:
All shall fade into murk and mist;
There shall be neither now nor here
When all becomes for ever clear.

(David Mitchell, Friday, 21st July, 2006.)
©2006-2009 ~dasliedvondererde
:icondasliedvondererde:

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An attempt to describe the Last Day.

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...wow

That is an inredible poem. Maybe just cos i'm a sucker for Revelations, but that is great storytelling. you managed to keep the pace of the story alive whilst using intelligent form. I really like this mate. great job. I wish i could reccomend this for a daily dev i really do.

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ARE YOU THE BRAIN SPECIALIST!!!
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~We-Love-Gaara-club
:iconknightofgarter:
This is a great poem! Vivid and intelligent description. The pace is powerful, breathtaking and fast.

I like it.

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"Honi soit qui mal y pense"

"shame upon him who thinks evil of it"
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:iconmoolatte:
OMG!!!!!!! This is an amazing poem. Not only are you able to keep the story and rhythm going, it rhymed and it sounded really, really good. I absolutely love it. This is my new favorite!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Icon by my good friend Emma Phox, aka: Moolate
:icondasliedvondererde:
Thank you very much. (Sorry about the delay in replying but I was on holiday.)

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I have gone astray like a lost sheep: seek Thy servant; for I do not forget Thy commandments. - Psalm 118 (119)
:icondasliedvondererde:
Thank you for liking it, and thank you for commenting, and thank you for favouriting, and sorry about the delay but I was on holiday.

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I have gone astray like a lost sheep: seek Thy servant; for I do not forget Thy commandments. - Psalm 118 (119)
:icondasliedvondererde:
I can always tell how much you like something by counting the exclamation marks - I don't think I've ever got thirty before, so thank you very much indeed, all those who commented. I shall make this my featured deviation, because I believe it is my best poem.

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I have gone astray like a lost sheep: seek Thy servant; for I do not forget Thy commandments. - Psalm 118 (119)
:icondasliedvondererde:
Does anybody think "Even so, come, Lord Jesus" would be a better title?

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I have gone astray like a lost sheep: seek Thy servant; for I do not forget Thy commandments. - Psalm 118 (119)
:iconmoolatte:
You're welcome! It really is a fantastic poem and you should make it your featured deviation. I'm going to go read it again right now!

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Icon by my good friend Emma Phox, aka: Moolate

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